
Part1:
John reached success and then failed.
There were 6 reasons for his fail, I think.
He had worked hard and pushed himself, but he has stopped.
Also he had tried to improve and do good work, but he has stopped.
In addition, He had thought about good ideas, focused on clients and project (not on the money) and had passion.
He bought a fast car moreover!
To avoid failing he should have had 8 principles: passion, work, focus, push, ideas, improve, serve and persist.
"Succsess is not a one-way street, but a continuous journey" is the thesis statement and it was said at the end of the speech.
Part2:
I think the results of his experiment mean..
if I have what I have to do now and what I'm looking forward to do, I should do what I have to do now firstly!
Then successes will wait for me.
I have self-disciplines now.
They are doing my assignments, preparing for my tests.
Also, I have many "marshmallows" now, for example playing with my English members, playing with my friends, visiting the high school where I went to and so on(^ω^)♥
I'll do my best for them☀!
In addition, I think that it must not be said that I'm looking forward to, but I want to visit Tohoku area to volunteer after I finish my tests.
John reached success and then failed.
There were 6 reasons for his fail, I think.
He had worked hard and pushed himself, but he has stopped.
Also he had tried to improve and do good work, but he has stopped.
In addition, He had thought about good ideas, focused on clients and project (not on the money) and had passion.
He bought a fast car moreover!
To avoid failing he should have had 8 principles: passion, work, focus, push, ideas, improve, serve and persist.
"Succsess is not a one-way street, but a continuous journey" is the thesis statement and it was said at the end of the speech.
Part2:
I think the results of his experiment mean..
if I have what I have to do now and what I'm looking forward to do, I should do what I have to do now firstly!
Then successes will wait for me.
I have self-disciplines now.
They are doing my assignments, preparing for my tests.
Also, I have many "marshmallows" now, for example playing with my English members, playing with my friends, visiting the high school where I went to and so on(^ω^)♥
I'll do my best for them☀!
In addition, I think that it must not be said that I'm looking forward to, but I want to visit Tohoku area to volunteer after I finish my tests.





